mturro/poem

a poem in git  ·  83 commits  ·  2012-12-22 – 2026-04-18

Poem(s) in progress...

This repository holds work-in-progress poems written in the markdown syntax. It started as an attempt to expose my creative process (to myself and to anyone who may care to watch) and track the nature and number of edits any given version of a poem might go through. I decided to use git (as opposed to some other tool like mediawiki) simply because it makes sense to me and it's a tool I use on a daily basis. I also found it affords a level of textual simplicty that more bloated CMS style tools lose in their effort to be complete publishing tools.

And then this happened.

At some point in the very early onset of this experiment the thought occurred to me that perhaps I wasn't envisioning a collection of poems, but rather had stumbled on to a framework for my own exploration of a technically focused twenty-first century epic poem. And then later on I realized that what I was in fact writing was a number of individual poems - something closer to the original intention of the repo. Whether or not this is a poem or a series of poems what seems clear to me at this point is that this is a definite attempt at coming up with a compositional technique that has something of the transparency of open source software. In other words, what is being explored here is not so much the poetic effect of language, but rather the poetic effect of process and technology.

A note about forking

This is not a collaboration project. (At least not yet.) This poem is simply me writing to myself using tools that I hope will capture the evolution of the poem from raw concept to something else. It is not intended for any other purpose than to exercise my brain and provide insight into the effects of code producing tools and web-level transparency on the eventual work. Even so, I am licensing it under a Creative Commons Attribution-NonCommercial-ShareAlike 3.0 Unported License. What that means is that you can (for whatever reason) fork this repo if you like. You can also edit, rewrite, and otherwise use this poem in any way you should see fit. The only restrictions are that you make your resulting repository available under the same terms, that you give proper attribution, and that you do not use the work or resulting work in a commercial way. It is also my hope that should you choose to fork this repository you continue to use git for all version control and editing and Markdown for all markup. In other words, please refrain from taking this poem offline or into some other platform other than github and please keep the work in a format that will make it easy to merge back into a main repository.

Metadata

While there is no formal metadata syntax at the outset of this project, I am considering using a standardized metadata format (some sort of YAML perhaps) and will update this space with that information when I have decided on what, if anything, it will be.

Further Thoughts

For more on the what and why of this all check the wiki and be sure to read commit messages - some are informative.

README.md →

poems

$ git log --oneline

f90ea812012-12-22Initial commit
311f9912012-12-22Update README.md
7ad89bf2012-12-22Update README.md
6a6ddbe2012-12-31Update README.md
a5005702012-12-31Update README.md
1df294a2012-12-31Update README.md
dcb1c722012-12-31Update README.md
20f713d2012-12-31Update README.md
b67791d2013-01-02thinking that this form works more as a single poem along the lines of The Cantos of Pound or Leaves of Grass
97998172013-01-02another step toward the realization of this repo as a single poem rather than a collection
c6b1a862013-01-02the simple edits are always the best
8602b7b2013-01-02the concept continues to grow and may yet get past a readme file
6afbd452013-01-02Struck the bit in readme about a collection of cantos - too arrogant.
f1db09a2013-01-03the first canto of an extended meditation
e0bc5ca2013-01-03wrestling with the concrete aspects of form
2dfe8662013-01-03wrestling with the concrete aspects of form, with space.
bfed91c2013-01-03wrestling with the concrete aspects of form, with space,again.
23206bf2013-01-03playing with markdown and the concrete aspects of form, with space,and blockquotes.
ce723192013-01-03getting the formatting down
2b8b39a2013-01-03playing with blockquote as a component of line form
6f51d212013-01-03Update open/a_meditation.md
eed39682013-01-04very rough first pass at notes on craft
c71edc22013-01-04very rough first pass at notes on craft
3f54b9c2013-01-04adjusting line breaks
0afffbd2013-01-04trying fourspaces and codeblocks for indentation on the second lin of couplets
acfe6582013-01-04trying fenced codeblocks for indentation on the second lin of couplets
462b75a2013-01-04trying fenced codeblocks for indentation on the second lin of couplets... again
7b96ceb2013-01-04some heavy editing of notes on craft
4a73fec2013-01-04At this point I am fairly unhappy with notes on craft, but feel that there is something there. I feel this will be a much longer piece... eventually
3dc405c2013-01-04Man, 'notes on craft' kind of sucks, but i still kind of like it... will keep working
f4d59862013-01-04Added play on craft and kraft to title
f1901152013-01-04for some reason the last quatrain seemed parenthetical so i made it explicit
21361e72013-01-04links added - not sure i like it but trying it anyway
42780482013-01-07killed the *and* between orange and glow
fc03cd12013-01-07the need for inclusion
f8ff4ae2013-01-07re-working the shopping section
9c71b2b2013-01-07fixing a line break in the shopping section
2ca95422013-01-08rough draft of *a failed experiment*
8bdc7c02013-01-08fixing line breaks in *a failed experiment*
ca433722013-01-08more...fixing line breaks in *a failed experiment*
e1000412013-01-12A lump clay, no form, no rules, just images and ideas, but I think I might like this one. Not sure the title will last though.
86054d12013-01-17OK, so I need to explain a little about what's going on here. The observant will notice quite a good deal of editing has gone on here. Not much in the way of editing the actual words as they may be spoken, but the line structure, the stanza structure, and the overall form have gone from a straightforward prose oriented short narrative and taken on a poetics inspired more by the concrete movement of the mid-late 20th century. This is indeed a lofty experiment as the concrete relied heavily on the intransigence of typesetting and the aesthetics of print--both of which are glaringly absent in a digital context. I am fully expecting the work done in this commit to fail if at least in some small way. Also new in this version is the introduction of quasi mathmatical symbols - a sort of psuedo code is creeping into this particular piece. I'll be greatly insterested to see if this seems faddish or gimmicky to me in a few days, but for now it seems appropriate.
6fd0b862013-01-17Playing with the logic of the "him as a splinter of time" metaphor by using the symbology of code. probably temporary and extreme, but finding it useful nontheless.
812f6c12013-01-25wrote this after being disgusted by a post on copyblogger about Bukowski and writing great copy
afb123a2013-01-25damn lines, damn Bukowski
028d8b62013-01-31Adjusted line symmetry so that the stanzas now run in a 11-7-7-11 pattern. In and of itself this offers no real significance, but it is refelective of a more carefull attention to mathmatical patterns in the work. Meter may be next.
5dd7c312013-02-05Doing some heavy editing on the stucture of this one. Aside from moving it from third to first person I am normalizing the structure heavily and eliminating the symbols and psuedo code that helped me work through the logic of the piece. This commit is about half way through this task, but I have to use the john so it is being sent up as is for now. Nice side effect is that it will give a bit more transparency to where and what I plan on doing with this piece.
4f8e28b2013-02-05more extensive editing - enforcing iambic pentameter - well that is the goal at least. Still miles to go
c6da6052013-02-05fixing a line break with a double return in line 1
24854dd2013-02-11pointing folks to wiki and commit messages
bfeac8e2013-02-11Linked to wiki page
e4c0e272013-02-11fixing typos
58b4c5a2013-02-11less definitive on the whole single work thing
bc3a3c82013-02-11added parenthetical sentence to second paragraph
f97476c2013-02-20Re-working the second paragraph.
0f6e4eb2013-02-20killing the directory open - don't want to think about directory strcuture and how it releates to the overall themes at this point.
77830bf2013-02-20out, out damn open
4f5402b2013-02-20killing the open directory - a premature attempt to enforce structure
6af7efe2013-02-20I am really having trouble with this poem - iambic pentameter is a pain in the ass - but for some reason i feel compelled to pursue it. Still not where it makes sense, but hopefully it will soon. I really do not remember the last time I put so much work into a poem.
d506de12013-02-20fixing line breaks
406fd692013-02-27this is a short poem written in a matter of seconds as an instant message - it will not evolve
edc13462013-02-28one little edit and that's it I swear
6098d842013-03-04a purely riffed poem about what I have no idea
aea5b242013-03-04fuck
7dcbf6d2013-03-06some new stream of consciousness stuff.
d88ab992013-03-06changed title and added lines to flesh out and explain the circumstances of how this poem came to be and to mourn the poem that never was.
49554ed2013-03-06killing the meta
e61db842013-03-21getting to the heart if the division poem. the theme of coming back to a poetic vision of the world - of poetry once again playing a role in a life that had largely left it behind - might yet give this particular poem som substance.
b0e85bd2013-10-11Update README.md
f2cbf692013-10-11Update README.md
3c2206b2013-10-11Update README.md
f0d53d62013-10-11Update README.md
4577f822013-10-11Update README.md
04679e52013-10-11a quick rant about things in doucheland
a7d15822026-04-11add: the conversation itself, which was always the poem
d9596d62026-04-11amend: the unabridged version, warts and all
d85b2802026-04-12add web reader: static site built from git history
bb73ee02026-04-12Merge pull request #1 from mturro/claude/analyze-repository-MD74X
1a9a00c2026-04-12Merge branch 'claude/git-poetry-tech-stack-YK0RD'
787e4a32026-04-12Merge branch 'master' of http://127.0.0.1:21403/git/mturro/poem
fc4a3d82026-04-12commit hashes now link to local pages instead of github
209446b2026-04-12surface README on index and as its own page
c58ff9e2026-04-18reverse commit log order on index: oldest first