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Adjusted line symmetry so that the stanzas now run in a 11-7-7-11 pattern. In and of itself this offers no real significance, but it is refelective of a more carefull attention to mathmatical patterns in the work. Meter may be next.

2013-01-31

open/bukowski_spins.md

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## Bukowski spins
"Food to share."
"Food to share"
A warm and inviting sentiment
painted white across a green wooden
box, weathered by time and and chipped by
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There is something in his approach that we can use to
sell this thing that nobody anywhere will ever really need.
"Food to share."
Pure healthy green food to share.
"Food to share"
Grown and given for no other reason
than the rightness of feeding each other.
At human scale, face to face, food is poetry.